Swallows
We haven’t seen so many this year, but we still delight in watching them.
Swallows
Away and to windward,
across Africa and Spain,
and high over the bay of Biscay,
the swallows are now returning;
their yachting wings bringing
them back to our village again;
as one by one they all arrive,
to gather – perched on lines.
Earth-bound I crane my neck
to follow them, while aloof they fly –
low and high as they quarter the sky.
My love for them must be in vain:
they do not – cannot, share their world,
for all they care for are bugs and air;
I can only watch them as they soar
as I’m left below – watching in awe.
© D G Moody
a very lovely poem for these amazing birds..
I hope they don’t go the same way as swifts, which seem to be down in numbers.
When I was a kid we rescued a swallow that got stuck in my uncle’s barn. When up close we could see their exquisite colouring in detail.
Fab birds!
D, elegant birds indeed. Just had an issue with the 2 “fly”” and “sky” rhymes in the second verse.
Thanks all, for the feedback. Re the fly/sky rhyme, yes, maybe a bit of revision? There is definitely one line that requires moving – will edit when I can drag myself away from the sun in our garden
Just an aside: I told you it was a misnome, we had rain AGAIN while you are out there enjoying the sun! 🙂
Nice write about these delightful performers.
They never fail to fascinate me with their swoops and dives, but sadly their numbers are very much down in my locality.
Allen
Thanks Allen, and apology for the tardy reply. Two reasons: my Gmail went AWOL, so managed to get access via Outlook – so lots of unread emails to catch up on. Also, we are presently in the middle of a building site, with workmen knocking down walls etc. So, not much spare time to write or comment here. But I’ll still read all the new ones.
Best……….Dodge
Updated 18.06.2021.
Dodge.