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Ifyouplease

wow…. thank you very much

Belcanto

Let’s see, shyguy. You welcomed suggestions on this a few months ago, did you not? Well, guess I could say add an s here, adjust title there – but I don’t actually think trifling changes like that could ever do justice to this idea, this concept of yours. Three lines, verbless at that, do not work in this instance. Your idea is too complex. But don’t stuff this in the back of a drawer, or worse, throw it away. Would urge you to take pen in hand and develop this into a much longer poem. Me, I’d personalize it at… Read more »

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