You sound like a pig
A triolet, I think 🙂 Shhh
Tell me why do you snore so loud in bed,
shaking the pictures and walls ?
The noises you make drill straight through my head,
tell me why do you snore so loud in bed.
When there’s nose clips to wear or oils to be spread
and you just sleep through it all.
Tell me why do you snore so loud in bed
shaking the pictures and walls ?
Tell me why do you sound like pig she said,
digging my ribs with her fist?
each night you find a new nerve to shred
Tell me why do you sound like pig she said,
please sleep down stairs or simply desist
there’s moments I wish you didn’t exist.
Tell me why do you sound like pig she said,
digging my ribs with her fist?
© savvi 2023
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Could not help but laugh at the perspectives you’ve presented. Lovely poem.
Have just spent two week in a caravan bed it felt appropriate and hopefully the humor is there to
In my reading I found humour, then in my contemplating I sensed discord – even anger. C’est la vie n’est pas! However your poem itself is entertaining,and certainly seems like a triolet to my understanding.
Allen
Oh yes there is certainly anger at 3 in the morning 🙂 thanks for the triolet confirmation
This really hurt. I mean, that is me; my wife berates me, and it is when the wine flows too easily. To make matters worse, our dog sleeps beside my side of the bed – and he joins in!