Of Dice and Men

A rhyming exercise.

Twice
I was bent on a splice.
Both girls were nice,
all sugar and spice;
I listened to their advice
to make a sacrifice
and give up the dice
but it didn’t suffice;
it was a vice
I could not excise.
I lived in a fool’s paradise
and paid the price.
 
© Luigi Pagano 2021

© ionicus 2022
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Bhi

Luigi,

I cannot provide any advice,
my words would not suffice
to add any lustre
to what is a clever cluster
of rhymes by a master.

I cannot compete with your mastery!

Dodgem

Tis clear
You’ve got the ear
of hat special muse
That always will amuse.

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