Strange

everyday
words, thoughts,
and actions
are used to
hurt others,
rarely to heal,
yet, with these
merciless maladies
I remain perpetually
in awe,
I am flawless is the
most indulgent flaw

© supratik 2022
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Guaj

I am flawless is the
most indulgent flaw

This is the most intelligent thing I have read today.

Classic example of “less is more”

Thank you, Supra

Last edited 1 year ago by Guaj
Griffonner

Yes. A very thought provoking, cleverly constructed, poem, Supratik.
Blessings, Allen

Franciman

I’m just here to echo the comments of others. A small gem… and the last couplet… perfect.
cheers,
Jim

Stormwolf

As my yoga teacher told me many years ago, “we need to be in the world…but not of it”
This poems speaks to me of that. I like your use of words.
Alison x

Dodgem

I’m late to this party! But wow! It packs so much into such a small space; the way the rhyme unfolds to deliver the perfect end lines! Well done friend
Dodge.

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