Single-minded
In the universe
I am this unicorn
For better or for worse
Peace is my unique horn.
I know it resides inside
Unable to rise, it hides
Hearts here have made it a fetish
To sing the song they long and cherish.
Then what am I doing here?
I feel it with faith and focus,
I hear the rhythm and canter
I let it out with the hoots in chorus.
© supratik 2020
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While your rhyme seems a bit off-kilter in places to me (but then I’m totally shit at rhyme). I can certainly appreciate the sentiment of this piece and it’s good to be reading the fine work here again.
blessings,
jolen
Hello Jolen! Thank you for stopping by. Yes I agree about the rhyme which I think may not coalesce with the canter, the horse will fall. Would I sound presumptuous if I said it was done on purpose? Ha ha ha! But I am glad you liked it. Means a lot. I appreciate your poems very much.
Best.
Supratik