Moments of Lust (Music Excerpt + poem)

Here is a poem I wrote quite a few years ago and the music is me with a Swedish harp player who, according to herself, couldn’t sing … :). I know for certain that I can’t.

Poem is supposed to reappear in my “The Stars may have gone Crazy” (Coming soon).


      Moments of Lust - Daniel T-R

 

The weakest moment

Caressed me too;

Of innocence I put the blame on you.

 

Fragile featherlike;

A moment lost,

Of wonders heaven styled;

Les tempes perdus.

 

I couldn’t breathe your name;

A tranquil storm.

My nights all gone insane;

You keep me warm.

 

Moments of wonder,

Moments of lust.

Fragile you ponder;

A game of trust.

 

There’s no more sound, I hear

A falling star.

In love no silent fear;

Too close afar.

 

I can’t but breathe your name,

In stillness clear.

The stars all gone insane;

You breathe too near.

 

You’re close …

You’re far …

 

 

 

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Ifyouplease
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is there a problem with the audio file?
I liked the lyrics, cool!

Ifyouplease
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lyrics are very passionate,

I can’t but breathe your name,

In stillness clear.

The stars all gone insane;

You breathe too near.

and this is too damn hot stuff

Featheredwing
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Hi there,
this poem is so beautiful, I played the music and found it incredibly haunting. I was able to hear everything clearly with the sound turned up high.

It works well as a poem too. Love the idea of fragile featherlike; a moment lost, of wonders heaven styled; Les tempes perdus. It fits perfectly.

Featheredwing.

Ifyouplease
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this one is for a female voice Evanescence style of music, probably needs an orchestra too which can be arranged with a synth. so far the two poems I read are not for simply an acoustic guitar. In my opinion of course.

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