Moments of Lust (Music Excerpt + poem)
Here is a poem I wrote quite a few years ago and the music is me with a Swedish harp player who, according to herself, couldn’t sing … :). I know for certain that I can’t.
Poem is supposed to reappear in my “The Stars may have gone Crazy” (Coming soon).
The weakest moment
Caressed me too;
Of innocence I put the blame on you.
Fragile featherlike;
A moment lost,
Of wonders heaven styled;
Les tempes perdus.
I couldn’t breathe your name;
A tranquil storm.
My nights all gone insane;
You keep me warm.
Moments of wonder,
Moments of lust.
Fragile you ponder;
A game of trust.
There’s no more sound, I hear
A falling star.
In love no silent fear;
Too close afar.
I can’t but breathe your name,
In stillness clear.
The stars all gone insane;
You breathe too near.
You’re close …
You’re far …
is there a problem with the audio file?
I liked the lyrics, cool!
Thank you dear lady. It’s a demo version really and all you hear is me with one exception and that would be the singeresse. Or should I say I can hear it but it’s a poor quality piece it is.
Good morning!!
perhaps it’s a problem with my internet, I can hear but it’s being interrupted every two or three seconds with a long pause.
the voice of the female is sweet and serene. I wish I could hear more of it.
I’ll p.m. you on that but my Internet seems slow too for the time being. Best regards.
mine is weird too maybe a big quake is about to happen, here the hot weather is getting unbearable again. it could also play a significant role in routers overheating or something like that.
lyrics are very passionate,
I can’t but breathe your name,
In stillness clear.
The stars all gone insane;
You breathe too near.
and this is too damn hot stuff
Hi there,
this poem is so beautiful, I played the music and found it incredibly haunting. I was able to hear everything clearly with the sound turned up high.
It works well as a poem too. Love the idea of fragile featherlike; a moment lost, of wonders heaven styled; Les tempes perdus. It fits perfectly.
Featheredwing.
Thank you very much. I was a Little extra anxious or so about what UKA would think about some pieces of mine and this is definitely one.
Kind regards
this one is for a female voice Evanescence style of music, probably needs an orchestra too which can be arranged with a synth. so far the two poems I read are not for simply an acoustic guitar. In my opinion of course.
Thank you. I agree. What you hear is actually a demo and it’s also included in a Project that’s finished (we had a very good time doing that Project btw)