Anger

 

Avoid using anger to claim
Your world, no matter what.
Choose your words,
Use them diligently,
Like a driver on a freeway.
Remember
Anger is a car without brakes,
Is a grass that
Doesn’t serve any purpose.

 

Inspired by the Brahmakumaris, a spiritual organization that teaches Rajyoga. 

© supratik 2020
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Could you please not post seven poems at once?

As I said earlier, the rule is 2 per publishing day.

That would be appreciated.

car without brakes perhaps? I don’t know but in Greek we say “without brakes” τα φρένα.

I am trying to understand the last two lines, why do you say grass, and do you perhaps mean lawn?

Ifyouplease

I think they call it weed. I am so against drugs that I don’t even know for sure how they call this totally purposeless shit.

Ifyouplease

black cumin for those who are trying to stop their drug abuse.

Ifyouplease

that’s good too, I have wondered if meditation can kill brain parasites or it never gets that effective in all it can do without getting rid of them first then meditate.

Ifyouplease

black cumin is against human parasites, it’s a great supplement. of course once you start killing them, they will try to kill you too. the Arabs say it cures everything but Death.
doing it for four years now. I suspect my now suffering from sciatica has a lot to do with getting rid of parasites.

we all have. all.

Ifyouplease

thanks for reading! this is a good poem, one I’m proud of.

Gee

Such an apt description. I particularly like “Anger is a car without brakes,”. People seem unable to know when to stop when they’re angry and it only builds until there is a completely lack of control.
I would also like to say that you conduct yourself with a great deal of dignity, something I admire.

TheRecluse

I think you are a disgrace to Rajyoga, Supratik! Why don’t you remove that obnoxious “poem” Garbage, based on your anger at having your grammatical mistakes corrected by an English scholar, and your misinterpretation of one of his poems, the obnoxious “poem” you wrote that started all this bad feeling, and then you might be less schizophrenic too. You won’t need to brown nose others and suddenly convince yourself you’re the Asian Guru of everything loving and peaceful, you can just be like the rest of us, your normal self? Let’s get back to reality?
Best Goth

TheRecluse

As I said to you earlier, I read that “Garbage”, early morning, just after it was published, before anyone had commented, and felt disgusted by its vitriolic undertone, and had forebodings of the trouble that was to come because of it. I am not a coat holder on these interactive sites. I assess the motives that drive people to become hostile to someone else entirely by empathy, not loyalty to anyone, nor to anyone’s cause. I can see from your reply, that the motives I named for writing that poem were correct. It was an insidious change of direction for… Read more »

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