The Invitation

poem


A weekend of sex and conversation,

At a neutral site.  You choose, if you like.

“Maybe the sex but I don’t want to talk.”

“What would we do when we’re not in bed?”

We’d read, and go for long, solo walks.

© slovitt 2020
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Ifyouplease

line spacing is weird.. but maybe you also have problems with it, I certainly end up with line spacing that is not what I wanted when I edit or rephrase etc.
if you copy the following text and paste it you will get rid of the extra empty lines between lines.
well have I seen this before? nice poem.

A weekend of sex and conversation,
At a neutral site. You choose, if you like.

“Maybe the sex but I don’t want to talk.”

“What would we do when we’re not in bed?”

We’d read, and go for long, solo walks.

Shywolf

A weekend of sex and conversation sans the conversation is my kinda invitation. Hope the reading and long solo walks were as stimulating as… Short and to the point, you’ve captured the essence of your subject without any extraneous distractions. Well done, Swep.

A_nembrini

Thanks for posting this.

When was it written?

I’d love to hear the story behind it

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