Turning Point.

It’s a bit previous but our weather lately brought this to mind.

Autumn drips honey’d and 

mellow, upon the lip of

jaded passion.

Pursed now and dry,

this fallen lady settles back

content within the ravaged


© sweetwater 2023
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What a stunning poem. Atmospheric, evoking such rich mental imagery and emotion. Also what a terrible shame to see no comments. ;-(
What is up with folk?
Allow me to nominate it to go with your existing nib.
A fav for me too.
Alison x


Love this one Sue, so good to read over and over, thank you Alison because I had missed it. Best keith

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