The Trophy Wall

250-words story.


I am told that Uncle Mortimer was a hunter who went on safaris and always
came back with a trophy. Judging by the heads of exotic animals stuffed
and framed on the wall, he must have been a very good shooter.

Among the vast collection one could see the medium-sized head of a springbok,
that of a panther and even one of a snarling crocodile.

I wish I could have met him. I would have liked to hear him recounting
his adventures but as he had departed to happy hunting grounds I had to
be content with my Granny’s second-hand account.

How he had relentlessly pursued an elephant, finally managing to bag its
head. It was in his opinion the biggest triumph and his proudest moment.

That had taken pride of place on the wall with the other victims, but what
intrigued me was its absence on the trophies’ parade.
An empty space was the only indication that at one time or another that had been the chosen location.

It was the result, Granny said, of the ‘incident’.

Uncle’s stunts generated a great amount of outrage for the slaughter of
endangered animals but also a lot of interest from the press.
Despite demonstrations, a celebration of the feat was organised by the
villagers who were in sympathy with the lord of the manor.

While posing underneath the pachyderm’s skull, with photographers snapping
away, the heavy frame fell from the wall and crushed Mortimer.

“You see”, Granny concluded, “elephants never forget”.
 

© Luigi Pagano 2017

 

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Gerry
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Being an animal lover I just hope Mortimer suffered quite a bit of pain – before he passed to the happy hunting grounds…;-)
Nice little short Luigi.

Gerry
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Being an animal lover I just hope Mortimer suffered quite a bit of pain – before he passed to the happy hunting grounds…;-)
Nice little short Luigi.

Gothicman
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This might be the original of “there’s an elephant in the room”, Luigi! A well-progressed and richly concise read. I hope more with this type of short and sweet literary skill like you possess submit flash fiction in future, even the poets might read it!, which would be good in helping them not to write too stilted. Enjoyed the tale! (Should the penultimate line read “crushed”?)

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