Disappointment.

I felt the day did not keep its word.  ( A bit ‘tongue in cheek’ really )


Now a downbeat

gloom riddled afternoon,

fast forsaken by the orb

of morn: warmth and gilded

fingers had offered

so much more…

 

 

© sweetwater 2020
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Savvi

Lovely word choices Sue, I can see every brush stroke. Delightful

Shackleton

Good one, Sweetwater. Doom and gloom pending over the next few days I think. Snow, rain and dark clouds on the way. Take care!

Ionicus

We should have learned by now that the winter weather is so unreliable and be prepared to be disappointed, Sue.
Think of the spring season that is around the corner and cheer yourself up.
Luigi x

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