Write Me A Song
Will you write me a song girl?
It would be rather cool
If the words were about me
Your own dancing fool
You could make it a sad song
To reflect where I’m at
Or maybe a ballad
What could be sweeter than that?
Will you write me a song girl?
You could make it the blues
I got no hood on my coat
And there’s rain in my shoes
But I don’t think you see me
Or hear what I say
So my song won’t get written
To allow you to play
Will you write me a song girl?
About love, lies and hate
Do it soon for my sake girl
Before it’s too late
It might not be a big hit
That don’t matter to me
For if you sang it I’d dance
And I would be free
Great poem, I enjoyed it very much, just one tiny thing that could possibly work better, the very last line, it somehow seems to fall a bit flat. Just my thoughts, please ignore if I’m wrong. 🙂 Sue.
Thank you Sue. I do agree as it was a rushed piece with minimal thought. I agree it does need a better end line.