Sleeper, Wake up.

An older one taken out and re-arranged somewhat.

      Sleeper Wake UP - SW

 

 

Young beautiful drowned woman in blue dress lying in the water outdoor

He does not know me
Although I wander through his dreams
and leave my calling card at his door,
speak his very words.

He does not know me

Though I move his chest in breath
and surround him in sleep
Though I wake with him at dawn
see through his empty eyes

He
does
not
know
me…

© stormwolf 2020
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It reads like a psalm, a passage of spiritual inspiration, to me. Or testimonial to the depth of your speaker’s devotion to what empowers her life, gives it meaning. Lovely. πŸ™‚

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