Ode To Toes December 19, 2022 Gothicman Poetry For children everywhere even here – photo from book Goth:2022 © Gothicman 2023Views: 377critique and comments welcome. 2 comments cycle of life, humour, in the box write
Ha ha, very droll. I might have written ‘falling on my arse’ but hard to rhyme with toes! Love the repetition and the last verse is priceless. Good one, Trevor.
Your comment Tony, which I thank you for, made me think that we should have an extra toe, or perhaps a thumb, at the back of our heels, like birds have? Then we’d be less likely to fall (totally plastered) backwards onto our ‘arses’, and we could, with a little contortionism, scratch our backs, even our bums when the need arises? Make trainers and socks look a bit daft though!