Lovers at the End

Another stab at a lyric poem.


I was the mighty river
You the hard ground
We shaped each other
Sculpted a spectacular canyon
Eternal because it is finished
Now it is time
For me to flow into the sea

© ChairmanWow 2022
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Guaj

Ah the Mighty Colorado river and the spectacular Grand Canyon. Two things I dream of visiting like you dream of Paris.

Nicely done, Bud

Dodgem

My kind of poem: spare and complete – a joy! Thanks CW
Dougie

Griffonner

Says it all, ChairmanWow, and in illuminating style with the bare minimum of words. Sometimes great things come in very small packages. This is one of those.
Allen

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