I Had Hoped….
I hoovered all the floors
today, just in case you came
I didn’t really think you would,
but did it all the same.
The polish and the duster
made every surface bright
I didn’t really think you’d come,
but hoped that you just might.
I set the kettle on the stove to
whistle out its song
and checked the biscuits in the tin,
in case you came along.
But now the day is almost done
dark shadows carve the wall,
and though I rather hoped you would,
you didn’t come to call.
© sweetwater 2023
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‘Dark shadows carve the wall’ such lines lift this into (IMHO) a perfect piece of sadness – the bright activity contrasting with – more than likely – a forlorn hope. Thanks sweetwater.
Dougie
Hi Dougie, I hadn’t really meant anything by that line particularly at the time but thinking about it now I think you are probably right. I appreciate your comment, thank you. sue.
It may be one of those poems that can be read in various ways – a strength I think. And with pets – how true! We got news yesterday of the deaths of two dogs we know; the feeling is of having lost friends.
I’m so sorry to hear that, dogs give so much love and friendship without expecting anything in return. I’ve lost so many different pets over the years and I mourn every single one. Sue.
I loved reading this…
Thank you very much 🙂 sue.