Part 20
Blue linoleum. White washed mausoleum. Plinth. Stone seat. Single door. Grill window. Strip lighting. Claw hammer. Ribs. Writhing. Winded. Wounded. Fingers. Feeling. Searching. Smashed. Plinth. Stone seat sanctuary. Legs. Straightened. Knee caps. Shattered. Rain. Grill window. Summer rain. Chainsaw. Soft skin cessation of hostilities. Daily decapitation. Blue linoleum. White washed mausoleum.
ST, Not too sure about this part. It’s too similar to the previous couple – the incessant sense of violence meted out. Am reading from the beginning to take stock of the continuity.
hi thanks for the comment. I think in a dystopian world violence would be probably incessant….probably like how we imagine hell to be. Violence without death.
I am writing as it comes. I think to write a story I might need 800 to 1000 parts so there will be some rejogging.
Part 21 by contrast has no violence.
thanks again.
Rejigging not rejogging