Part 16

Fiction

Follow the road.  Burton Agnes Hall.  A straight road.  Via right.  Via left.  A straight road.  Getting higher.  Via right.  Via left.  A straight road.  Via right.  Via left.  Rudston.  One road.  Gets higher.  Higher.  Higher.  At some point.  In the distance.  The feeling.  Changes.  Thousands of spirits.  Rolling down hills.  Bellowing smoke.  Shadows.  Offended.  Deaths.  Deities. Spirits.  At some point.  A decision made.  Human combustion. Create a cult.  Based on burning.  Create an antidote.  That is cleansing.  Create an allegiance. To an idea.  Fit for the future.  Create a cult that craves death.  Follow the road.  Look for the candles.

 

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ionicus

The first sentence Follow the road reminds me of that famous quote by Yogi Berra:
“When You Come to a Fork in the Road, Take It!”
Could it be included in the text? Or would it be a deviation from the plot? 🙂

Last edited 3 years ago by ionicus
swissterrace

Hi

Thanks for the comment and the idea. I am trying to write a story in short parts. Maybe 100-200 words per day.

Some bits I am writing are like conjunctions, providing the more flesh to what I am thinking are storylines.

This part is a bit of a conjuction and the if you were to take a map and find these places. follow the road. you would see the journey that alludes to part of the story.