Part 11
I first saw you in a corridor. A corridor high in a building. Built on a hillside. It was late in the day and the sun was bright. You were heading west. Silhouetted against a window. Rays of light surrounded you. Walking west away from me. As I watched the drums started in my head. The beat amplified by blinding light from a west facing window. Frozen for a moment, yet sometimes, oftentimes, you are still there, even now. The drums beating in my head. A rhythm that has remained. I saw your long straight hair. I remember your clothes and your smell. And I remember fleetingly a face. You turned and looked east. Two faces fleetingly facing the future.
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The drum beat of your sentences mirrors the the beat inside. You say so much with so little and leave so much hanging.
hi thanks for the feedback..picked up a story i started last year…if your read the earlier bits parts 1 – 9 you will see it mirrors a bit what is going on now…if id finished last year omg id be loaded