something beautiful

something beautiful
 
god is a song half-heard in the street
 
a yellow fog November evening
spent dipping skips for firewood –
while dragging home a kicked-in door,
floorboards and a busted bed
 
from somewhere down the fly-tip street
of cardboard window low-rent housing –
homes for single mums, and addicts
doing deals on shady corners
 
a harmonium led a choir of voices
praising an Eastern deity
 
I listened an eternity
(or so it seemed)
till the singing faded and
a honey silence settled 
 
minutes later
a cluster of unknown
bearded men in long white robes,
bobble hats, and zip-up tops,
unchained bikes from rusted railings
and ghosted into winter gloom
 
something beautiful
had visited my street
breathed into it
and moved on

© coolhermit 2021
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Guaj

You paint a great scene here, Rick. I reminded me that my great grandfather was a Major in the Salvation Army back in Victoria’s day apparently.

I like the irony of this piece

Bhi

Something beautiful indeed comes this way. Beauty everywhere there is.

Griffonner

I awarded you fresh, dripping in dew, cherries the first time I read this, Rick. What makes it so memorable I think is the stark contrast between the protagonist’s purpose and means, and his/her recognition of… shall I call it ‘spiritual’… beauty. Whatever, a brilliant piece of work.
Allen

Franciman

I felt the cold through the thin soles of my trainers… There is a magic in this, a spiritual,ecumenical droplet from paradise. It reminds me of the Ghost of Christmas Present and his cornucopia sprinkling Christmas goodwill on all he passes. Incongruous, I know… And yet; the grimy miracle works in me. One I shall read frequently,and treasure.
Cheers,
Jim

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Mentalelf

A powerful memory mate. In the coldest darkest of places often something shines through the murk. I felt like I was there listening secretly from some dark hovel.

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