Her shadow followed him like his own. They were inseparable. Like any other couple, they would also do things together, but there was something unique about this pair. He could sit with her for hours looking at her nimble fingers that wrote dissertations for him, cooked for him, ran softly through his hair, muscular biceps, his wide rough terrains, while his would help her in the kitchen, on the roads, or simply  feel her delicate form dancing, singing, being in the shower, dining; his hands would tell her millions of starry stories gliding through the known meadows; while she would  melt in his hands, he could do anything for her touch. It was as if both the pairs of hands had eyes to see, ears to hear, the foursome knew and played with each other like young playmates.

They were not pressed for time. Both were writers, but their lifestyle was fueled by huge inheritance, or blessings from divine hands, as they would call it! 

– Writing is very fast, isn’t it love?
– Fast? How!
– You can wash your hands of a twenty-five-year-old story in just one paragraph!
– Or finish in a flash as they say!

And they laughed together. At other times, they would argue on why Sanskrit literature didn’t have tragedy and why Greek’s was so full of them. In the middle of nights, they would wake themselves up, have coffee, talk about losing as winning and other subjects in great depth that couples their age wouldn’t even think of; for instance, how unconsciousness drifts people away from the truth, why relationship is more important than material success, how would Shakespeare talk to Tagore had the two met, and so on; their poor daughter would sometimes come in the middle and say to her parents, perpetually engaged and involved with each other as if the two were one, that she didn’t want to feel like an orphan.

They were known in their neighbourhood not only as lovebirds, but also as responsible parents; one loving daughter was their world. Hands-on activists, they helped the less unfortunate wherever they were and whenever they could. However, they were not attached to any NGOs. A warm and close-knit family, they also helped many people fighting loneliness.

– You are getting more likes now.
– What do you mean?
– Nothing. But I like it.
– Good to know that.

Slowly, they stepped into a strange world, a world where their passion was defined and valued by others. They stopped giving each other a hand; didn’t realize that an invisible monster was invading into their lives. Years ago, they waved off the same monster that attacked them in bits and pieces, as family members; strangely, hostility from their respective parents-in-law and the comfort of blaming them brought the writers closer. Later, both pairs of parents made amends and the monster fled, for good. But this time around it had become very personal. Society never played an important role with them. Their bonding was never affected; they were consciously in their green room practising how to face the stage together. But this time around the monster got the better of them, as there was a room for jealousy they hadn’t figured. Words changed, actions weren’t characterizing them anymore, their daughter was unable to recognize them.

They broke off. Now they stay in the same conglomerate, but in three different flats; their daughter, working in an MNC, has also moved out. In all these three apartments there is one common picture, a large one that occupies their living rooms.

It is a picture of a beach with a big sand house that looked almost like a ship, built long ago on one of their usual trips to the Kovalam beach in Kerala, in front of which the daughter is seen swinging in between her parents. Underneath, there were these words written in italic:

Nothing can destroy it

With wedding rings still on their fingers, the hands, full of stories, occasionally meet to say hello. 

© supratik 2020
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Is this autobiographical Supratik, or biographical, someone you know? It comes over as a short storyline of how a family situation developed from having mutual, self-promoting interests at a ‘good intention’ start, to one of this initial bond being slowly destroyed by external influences at an individual level working differently on each partner, presumably this is the ‘monster’ you refer to? Where it needs more clarity as to what it is that’s gradually driving them apart, seems to me, is at the point in the story starting: ‘You are getting more likes now…….’ The ‘monster’ as the cause of the… Read more »


Thanks for this lengthy reply Supratik. Goth is though still puzzled by your reply, still trying to understand it in relation to the prose text and its overall messaging. Goth has tried re-reading it while approaching it more philosophically, trying to connect it less to the syntax and semantics of what you have actually written in English, and more from the perspective of what you have added as explanation above. But, in all honesty, Goth is still struggling to make that connection. Either your attempt to bring forth a hidden agenda by gradually revealing it less and less off-centre has… Read more »


Thanks Supratik, I hope you all enjoy your end of the year trip to the eco-resort.

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