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Stormwolf

Beautifully expressed. I have come to truly adore poems such as this, that use supreme economy of words.
To me it makes the poem become a true ‘perfume’ concentrated and divine as opposed to a weaker Eau de toilette to use that analogy.
We do not need to use an abundance of words to distil a strong feeling in the reader.
Alison x

Gomathi

Loved reading this one! Keeping it crisp and clear. An art I have to sincerely learn. Perfume analogy was a good one Alison! A very beautiful thought put so well Sue.
Best Wishes, Gomathi.

Ionicus

Nice and concise with good rhythm and rhyming. Well done Sue, one of your best,

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