On My Way Back
from the pharmacy
with my chest complaint
and my bag of medication
I’m walking past
a multicultural traffic-jam
long enough not to inhale
exhaust fumes looped
across the road
so it’s hard to both
gasp and enjoy
the multiculturalism
of music fist-pumping the air
from wound-down windows;
to pass the idling time
while going nowhere
drivers with one arm out
slapping their doors
aim bored stares at me
to make me self-conscious
so I might trip in slow-motion
on the unrepaired pavement
and then they’d laugh
a mocking multicultural laugh
I pass the old speckled woman
sun-drying at number 121
on a rain-stained sofa
that sets off her front garden
weeds salient fumes rampant
she’s doing her diurnal sit
muttering her marbled beads
as usual begging Allah
to pull his finger out and
do what she asked for yesterday
.
Some very good observations here and I feel you managed to convey both the diversity and the similarity that all people share in common. I particularly liked your description of
“exhaust fumes looped
across the road
like webs in the air”
And your final verse.
blessings,
jolen
Thank you, jolen, for your positive comments. I didn’t want the ambiance in this poem to come across as more than a bit alienating, just slightly disquieting.
Regards, Gerald.
I think you have managed that and then some, Gerald. Have a good weekend.
Thanks, Trevor. Waiting for something new to turn up.
Regards, Gerald.