Should I Go?

 


Why, thank you,

I’d love to come..

But would I?

a lone voice

caught in the song

of many, slightly

out of tune

and out of

time, missing 

the beat they

all hear.

Standing

silent in 

the shadows.

 

 

© sweetwater 2020
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Ionicus

A dilemma that many self-effacing people face, questioning their own worth and doubtful of being able to make a useful contribution to a society with which they don;t feel any affinity.
A point well made, Sue.

Luigi x

Supratik

I could connect with the poem instantly. The lines are so agile and nimble they have an audiovisual effect on the reader’s mind. Well done.
Supratik

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