Tapping Toes.
Helter-skelter
tumble leaves,
twisting turning,
summer spurning.
Crisp and sharp
to dance along
each tapping toe
calls autumn’s song.
© sweetwater 2020
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Helter-skelter
tumble leaves,
twisting turning,
summer spurning.
Crisp and sharp
to dance along
each tapping toe
calls autumn’s song.
Like it. Rhythmically succinct and clever depiction of the seasonal, autumnal changeover.
Cheers.
Thank you, much appreciated 🙂 sue.
A very nice read that sets the mood for poetry. You therefore, inevitably reread.
Supratik
Thank you Supratik, you are very kind. X
Short, sharp, with clever rhyming, Sue. I used to love kicking through piles of light brown, autumn leaves, almost as much as lighting and smelling a bonfire, till irresponsible dog owners made it too riskable! Another little gem!
Trevor
Thank you Trevor, whatever happened to the autumn bonfires? Loved the smell but now nobody has them.
sue x
Super. Short, lovely rhyme and evokes the crispness of fall.
blessings,
jolen