Tapping Toes.
Helter-skelter
tumble leaves,
twisting turning,
summer spurning.
Crisp and sharp
to dance along
each tapping toe
calls autumn’s song.
© sweetwater 2022
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Helter-skelter
tumble leaves,
twisting turning,
summer spurning.
Crisp and sharp
to dance along
each tapping toe
calls autumn’s song.
(@amman)Like it. Rhythmically succinct and clever depiction of the seasonal, autumnal changeover.
Cheers.
(@sweetwater)Thank you, much appreciated 🙂 sue.
(@supratik)A very nice read that sets the mood for poetry. You therefore, inevitably reread.
Supratik
(@sweetwater)Thank you Supratik, you are very kind. X
(@sweetwater)Thank you Trevor, whatever happened to the autumn bonfires? Loved the smell but now nobody has them.
sue x
(@jolen)Super. Short, lovely rhyme and evokes the crispness of fall.
blessings,
jolen