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Amman

Like it. Rhythmically succinct and clever depiction of the seasonal, autumnal changeover.
Cheers.

Supratik

A very nice read that sets the mood for poetry. You therefore, inevitably reread.
Supratik

TheRecluse

Short, sharp, with clever rhyming, Sue. I used to love kicking through piles of light brown, autumn leaves, almost as much as lighting and smelling a bonfire, till irresponsible dog owners made it too riskable! Another little gem!
Trevor

Jolen

Super. Short, lovely rhyme and evokes the crispness of fall.

blessings,
jolen

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