Loving words
‘Till death do us part’.
I remember you saying
This, holding my hand.
I didn’t understand
You meant death
In the relationship.
Fair enough.
Else it is always easy
To say things,
Recite touching quotes,
Without meaning anything,
Like the one here,
‘Love me the most
When I deserve it the least?’
© supratik 2023
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Hmm. Straightforward piece indeed and one of the few times I comment on your work maestro. Not much to add really other than that it’s not normally things like this I read from you but it’s very good as usual. We’re there again: are words things or “only” words lol?
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Yes the poem is an extension of ‘Empty words’ and ‘Thoughts are things’. But technically empty words is also an etiquette in grammar, which is also known as pleonasm or tautology, e.g. repeat again, reply back, uniformly homogenous, cubic feet in volume, past history, future plan, etc.
Yes I wanted it to be straightforward. I am trying to write a poem on lovemaking, something that promises to bring orgasm in the happy minds. Let me see if I can do it.
Thank you once again.
Best
Supratik