Where is Thy Land?




In darkish fervour;

Tainted moon …

Painted moments,

Gone too soon.



Laugh out loud!

No hand in hand …

Waiting moments,

My aim too proud?



Thy tarnished wings

To challenge sun …

A cry out loud;

Piano sings …



A silent smile,

And eyes turned blue;

To cast a spell …

Let’s pause a while.



Thou lie awake,

In bloom refined …

Of dark and heart;

My senses take!



No words of sand;

No melody …

An eve to trust …

Where is thy land?

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“Where is thy land?”, I think you mean.


I was hoping my Mimetic Moments to be published today but alas! for some reason the poem was not published, I wonder what happened, not that it was for the poetry challenge, but the poem would become a triptych for the challenge, and I wanted to have the first one (old enough) published before the poetry challenge part.

well done Fred!


Diary of Dreams style of music for this one (in my opinion of course), probably needs a male voice. Has gothic vibes.

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