Lately I Find

For the poetry challenge.


Lately I find

Lately I find

You’re on my mind

More than I care

To have you there.


You fill my soul,

Which takes its toll;

My sleep has gone

To some far bourne.


Is there no end?

Some angel send

To free my heart

To freshly start.


This therefore means

And, surely seems

It won’t abate –

My undying hate.


© Whale 2020
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very interesting poem thank you for joining,
I may be completely wrong but is it about hating God? Is it about losing one’s religion like in that song by REM?

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