Lost Paths. October 8, 2018 sweetwater Poetry The day dawns, draws upon me a shadow: a tiredness follows pulling away away the light, ripples from the future puddle round my feet washing away the paths which once beckoned. 0 0 votes Rate This Writing 3 Comments introspection
a typo 3rd line
yes sometimes we are too tired to follow or remember the right path.
nice
Thank you for commenting and for the typo pointer, both are much appreciated. 🙂 sue.
I like it and while it is not a long piece it still manages to evoke feeling well done
Thank you very much, I appreciate you reading and commenting. A lot of mine are fairly short. 🙂 sue.
Good one Sue.
Thank you so much Supratik 🙂 sue.