Lost Paths.

 

The day dawns, draws upon me

a shadow:

 

a tiredness follows

pulling away away the light,

ripples from

the future puddle round my feet

 

washing away the paths which

once beckoned.

 

 

© sweetwater 2018
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a typo 3rd line
yes sometimes we are too tired to follow or remember the right path.

nice

Pelequininwonderland
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I like it and while it is not a long piece it still manages to evoke feeling well done

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Good one Sue.

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