Lost Paths.
The day dawns, draws upon me
a shadow:
a tiredness follows
pulling away away the light,
ripples from
the future puddle round my feet
washing away the paths which
once beckoned.
© sweetwater 2023
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The day dawns, draws upon me
a shadow:
a tiredness follows
pulling away away the light,
ripples from
the future puddle round my feet
washing away the paths which
once beckoned.
a typo 3rd line
yes sometimes we are too tired to follow or remember the right path.
nice
Thank you for commenting and for the typo pointer, both are much appreciated. 🙂 sue.
I like it and while it is not a long piece it still manages to evoke feeling well done
Thank you very much, I appreciate you reading and commenting. A lot of mine are fairly short. 🙂 sue.
Good one Sue.
Thank you so much Supratik 🙂 sue.