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May 22, 2017 capricorn Poetry

Something to think about

the test-tube baby
brings a mother untold joy;
father’s unaware

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5 years ago

I like this Capricorn there is a nice balance between joy and the not knowing. Best Keith

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5 years ago

Thank you Keith – I’m glad you found this interesting.
Eira

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