All your best friends are among the dead.
There’s no betrayal, foul play or iniquity,
no sexual harassment and no unfaitfulness
among the spiritual survivors in the land of purity
beyond the grave, who are the more alive
for staying there in touch with you continuously
in love that has transcended every weakness of mortality.
They are the only pure of heart, the living dead
that only can be felt and make themselves reminded
by the spiritual touch of the sincerity of everlasting love.
This might sound bitter, but it’s only facts of life
and of reality, that will not offer more at length
than broken hearts of losses, disappointments and delusions.

© lailaroth 2023
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I like the added picture to enhance your writing. I feel ‘This might seem bitter’ is unnecessary in that line as the reader can sense the bitterness.

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