Dancing Shoes
Put on your dancing shoes
We’re gonna go out tonight
Put on your dancing shoes
We gotta look just right
Everybody’s gonna look at us
Everybody’s gonna wish they were us
Put on your dancing shoes
Because we’re gonna go out tonight
© marvo 2023
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I like this it reads like the chorus to a song, if you added a few verses with something I could engage with then I’m in, the style and structure is solid and it plays well but I think it would help if you give the reader a bit more to work with. Best Keith