Dancing Shoes


Put on your dancing shoes

We’re gonna go out tonight

Put on your dancing shoes

We gotta look just right

Everybody’s gonna look at us

Everybody’s gonna wish they were us

Put on your dancing shoes

Because we’re gonna go out tonight

© marvo 2023
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I like this it reads like the chorus to a song, if you added a few verses with something I could engage with then I’m in, the style and structure is solid and it plays well but I think it would help if you give the reader a bit more to work with. Best Keith

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