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franciman

Spare with words but wide in scope and thought provoking.
Really enjoyed this Sue.
Cheers,
Jim

mikeverdi

One of your best Sue, the whole work flows beautifully.
Mike XxX

savvi

Love the brevity in this Sue a great extended metaphor for that restless night lonely quiet of the morning, so much in this short piece I can relate to, really well done and deserved Nom. Best Keith

nemo

Brevity has a lot going for it and your poem reminds me to try it more often. “..pulls the day awake…” is a genius of an image and I can relate to your evocation of waiting for the morning, which may or may not bring some relief. Congrats on the nom!
Gerald

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