Fallen Dreams.

There’s no personal meaning in this, it just came to me as I was out with my dog just mooching about in the park behind my house.

Leaves drift down,

mere moments in time

quickly lost,

falling beyond the hand.

Catching our dreams

as they pass,

to lie broken beneath

our feet.

© sweetwater 2023
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broken or crumpling perhaps lie or lay?

Catching our dreams

as they pass,

broken beneath our feet

they lay.

(i liked it very much – had to share my ideas hope you don’t mind – comment edited. )

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