What Seas Did You Sail?
Seas full of icebergs
in the middle of the world
frozen spikes of water
are concrete and glass
that show the passage of light
a shoulder, a leg, a skull,
that looks like a truck
that looks like a street
strides over and out
of reflection.
WHAT SKIES DID YOU FEATHER?
Beware windows keep faces
behind two panes
eyes, cheeks, teeth captured
when you glance through
a wrong glass at the outside.
© paulloz 2023
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Interesting but the end of the third stanza – the unattached strides – lost me a bit. Nicely disjointed and surreal. Mitch
Cheers Mitch. It’s all surreal so misunderstanding is usual
Nowt wrong with that in anarchically measured amounts!
Question: How many surrealists does it take to change a lightbulb?
Answer: A fish!
on a tandem