The Last American Buffalo
An older one as I have nothing new to offer…
Bleached white bones;
the remains of our day in the sun.
Such is the carcass of hope.
Full-fleshed, it filled a far forever.
Hand fed it came to manhood,
till hobbled by compromise,
it settled for domestication
and promises of greener grass.
Years pass and pasture turns to dust.
Enough to have the sun upon our back
and tell tall tales to younger bulls,
of fields beyond the hill.
Soon comes the end of days.
We lie along our birth earth,
and watch our flaming sun
fall down the sky.
© franciman 2023
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Very good, Jim. The alliteration helps to bring it alive.
I was just wondering if you could maybe think of a more inventive verb than “grew”…
Hi Archie.
Thank you for that. I see what you mean and will change ‘grew’ to ‘came’. It does sound much better….
Hmmm… I’m not sure if “came” works, Jim… I was thinking more of something like “shuffled” or “slouched” maybe, something involving cattle-like movement…
Hi Goth.
I am moved and inspired by your comment. Poetry is my escape, not my bag; though I love to read it and write it myself. At the moment I am having trouble finding the motivation for verse, but sure! It will return?