“Apitate Eternity Ring”
A recent revision – ruthlessly edited to less than 50 percent of the original – but, hopefully, perfectly formed and you shouldn’t see the join 🙂
No bank remains on the High Street corner
Where the Yorkshire Penny once stood.
On Saturday afternoons
Its granite steps transformed
To a gospel preachers’ rostrum
As with spittle flecked chins they
Bellowed at sinful shoppers passing by
God’s everlasting love for them
And the assurance of perpetual burning,
For the recalcitrant
Just a heart beat away.
My fiancée, dumped the Apitate ring
I sent her with a perfectly pitched note
’Please forgive my daily infidelities’
In a strong box in the Penny Bank crypt.
A café bar lounge casino now
Squats above the vault
Where my lover
Consigned my memory to
Darkness in perpetuity,
Burying what might have been,
But never was,
World without end
Amen.
Hallelujah! Small and perfectly formed but would suggest a minor tweakette:
With spittle-flecked chins they bellowed
at sinful shoppers and passers-by
of God’s everlasting love in equal measure
with assurances of their perpetual burning,
Mitch
Cheers, Mitch – I’ll mull it and sleep on it – always glad of your input 🙂
Rick 🙂