Let me enter you
but without tears and pains,
to have a peep around your mind,
investigating feelings and vibrations
just to get to know you
to sort out and harmonize our music
and discover other universes than our own
with no hard feelings and no stealth at all,
but just the contrary: enrichment,
to find out how it all came about
that we two found a common tone
that keeps resounding in our hearts.
My friend, I have been inside you since then,
and I have stolen you into my heart.


© aurelio 2023
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I like this piece, It talks of something many would wish to do, look into others’ minds, we try but personally I fail.


I wrote something very similar several years ago, but certainly not as
beautIfully as you have have done.

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