the art of loving through frosted glass
voyeurism by any other name?
6:28 – I’m stationed in the courtyard.
punctual, 2 minutes later, she appears
framed in the bathroom window, undraped, her lines from
breast to hip splashed on to the glass by
the motion of her hands soaping across her shores.
I watch unwavering her morning matinee
until I hear the whistling train,
rush to take my appointed seat,
her form, still warm behind my eye,
sustaining me through the prismed day,
and at end when the magic of the maths I play
dims, I conjure up her splendiferous curves,
this woman etched in frosted glass,
and trembling, piped by tube and train, hasten home
anticipating the meld of her lines with mine
and she, my love of twenty years, waiting.
© Bhi 2023
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That last line…. turns the whole poem brilliantly on its head.
Thanks Dougie. I thought I would turn my hand to love, literally, this week after last weeks emotional outburst. I had been thinking of using “wife” in the last line, but decided against that. Glad you liked it.
B
Wait a minute, if you can see her everyone else in the courtyard can! The “magic of maths I play dims” line is great. I believe you are an engineer so i imagine it must be referring to your work.
CW, it is a private courtyard, enclosed and fit for intimacy between a couple at all hours!