Green Peace.
Nestled ‘neath the watching trees
whose leaves now bless with
shades of calm.
Sheltered nooks are solace found
where lies the balm of silent thought,
whispered breezes steal your cares
and birds will soften them in song.
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Good one Sue. Isn’t the penultimate line too long.
Supratik
Thank you Supratik, I’m pleased you read it, I didn’t think personally it’s too long, I did the count and it fits the other lines. But I will look again. sue. 🙂
Ah I’ve just noticed on my tablet that line and the previous one has somehow joined up, it should stop at thought and the penultimate line begins with whispered.
I’m have huge problems with the site and my devices, so please excuse any glaring mistakes. X
I can completely understand. Please take care. This too shall pass. We are all in it together. Let the other sentient beings play around for a while.