parting thought

Inspired by the first murder in the ‘Lewis’ pilot show  🙂 I think perhaps the 2nd version is less poor but it’s only a lighthearted black humour piece.


I would not mind that much

if some killer sneaked in

and shot me through the head

while I was fast asleep.

 

I would kind of welcome

dying by ‘friendly fire’

say an old amigo

taking aim, waxing me

 

‘pro bono publico’.

 

variant 2

 

I would not mind that much

if some killer sneaked in

and shot me through the head

while I was fast asleep.

 

I would kind of welcome

a death by ‘friendly fire’

from an old amigo

waxing me ‘pro bono’.

 

 

 

 

 

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