The Sad Telephone

Intro: up to 50 words (delete this text and enter your own)


3Haikus ©

 

 

It sits silently

There on the wall, cord hung down

As if it was sad-

Had no rings today,

Hubby, wife or children,

Grandma or grandpa,

 

No “hellos’ at all,

Not a conversation held

With anybody.

 

W.C.Hull © 2019-20-4-3H94-1197-V1#22-44

© WCHull 2020
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nice and clear!

Mitch

Solid and the Haiku mode 0f 5-7-5 syllables – add a blank line after the first to separate the two haikus. The second one lacks the intuitive leap between the last line (being a list – c/be ‘and no relation’) and the rest but haikus 1 and 3 are sound… great stuff.

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