The Sad Telephone
Intro: up to 50 words (delete this text and enter your own)
3Haikus ©
It sits silently
There on the wall, cord hung down
As if it was sad-
Had no rings today,
Hubby, wife or children,
Grandma or grandpa,
No “hellos’ at all,
Not a conversation held
With anybody.
W.C.Hull © 2019-20-4-3H94-1197-V1#22-44
© WCHull 2023
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nice and clear!
Solid and the Haiku mode 0f 5-7-5 syllables – add a blank line after the first to separate the two haikus. The second one lacks the intuitive leap between the last line (being a list – c/be ‘and no relation’) and the rest but haikus 1 and 3 are sound… great stuff.