Life’s Shadows.

Terror grips:

drawing black threads

through the fearing,

 

tightening,

pulling all thoughts

towards the deep:

 

 

teetering on the edge-

reason calls,

softly,

barely there…

Wait!

© sweetwater 2019
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i don’t know why i see two pages i think it has happened to one of my submissions too,

wait, i like your poem, waiting is as important as carpe diem.

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You’ve got two pages because you have inserted a ‘page break’ when you submitted. Probably in error :). I’ve removed it now.

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