YOU!
Please take this in how you perceive it! Written to screen on the spur of the moment so forgive me if the stanzas are out and untweaked.
Two people
one body,
separate minds,
two tongues.
Loneliness,
discontent.
Never satisfied,
always want,
No one
is good
enough.
Perfection.
Standards.
Your way.
Ill thoughts,
breed words
of hate
and jealousy
that fall
from lips
that once
kissed
with love,
Affection.
Hugs that
comforted are,
Now discontinued.
Only hate
resides
in the
shell
of who
YOU used
to be.
Anger and
lies are
all that
surface
from you.
No remorse.
No forgiveness.
No understanding.
Your mind
is not
YOU…anymore.
YOU are
not
YOU anymore.
Nothing but
a deep
feeling of
hatred
for someone
who loved
YOU
still does.
Hurtful words,
have pushed
many away
from
YOU!
And YOU
still can’t see
things for
what they
really are,
for how,
they really are.
YOU don’t
care for
anyone
than yourself.
YOU don’t see
the pain
you cause
others.
Only
your own.
YOU live
but you’re
dead inside
No warmth,
unless others
do your
bidding
When YOU
ask
or demand.
Your anger,
your spite
your other
side
rears its
ugly head,
too many
times.
No one
left
to do
what YOU want.
No one left
to run
around
be snapped at
humiliated
made to
feel
worthless.
Blamed
for things
that never
happened
only in
your head
your thoughts
that
provoke
feelings
that shouldn’t
exist.
No Cure
No remedy
YOU only
listen
to
yourself
No one
else is wrong
You are right
always.
No apologies
ever!
In hospital,
No visitors,
Alone,
no one
cares.
They do.
YOU pushed
them away.
People have
always cared,
but YOU
see them
differently
as now
they see
YOU!
Multiple minds
in one
body.
The real
YOU
lost
in a
scrambled, complicated
unknown mix
of life
of reality
and your thoughts
that have
created
someone
But have
you ever
been really
YOU?
The second one is my favourite. A great deal of efficient wording. Succint but effective. Good work!