YOU!

Please take this in how you perceive it!  Written to screen on the spur of the moment so forgive me if the stanzas are out and untweaked. 


Two people

one body,

separate minds,

two tongues.

Loneliness,

discontent.

 

Never satisfied,

always want,

No one

is good

enough. 

Perfection.

Standards.

Your way.

 

Ill thoughts,

breed words

of hate

and jealousy

that fall

from lips

that once

kissed

with love,

Affection.

 

Hugs that

comforted are,

Now discontinued.

Only hate

resides

in the 

shell

of who

YOU used

to be.

 

Anger and 

lies are 

all that

surface

from you. 

No remorse.

No forgiveness.

No understanding.

 

Your mind

is not

YOU…anymore.

YOU are

not

YOU anymore.

Nothing but

a deep

feeling of 

hatred

for someone

who loved

YOU

still does.

 

Hurtful words,

have pushed 

many away

from

YOU!

And YOU

still can’t see

things for

what they

really are,

for how,

they really are. 

 

YOU don’t

care for

anyone

than yourself.

YOU don’t see

the pain

you cause

others.

Only

your own.

 

YOU live

but you’re

dead inside

No warmth,

unless others

do your

bidding

When YOU

ask

or demand. 

 

Your anger,

your spite

your other

side

rears its

ugly head,

too many

times.

 

No one

left

to do

what YOU want.

No one left

to run

around

be snapped at

humiliated

made to

feel

worthless.

 

Blamed

for things

that never

happened

only in

your head

your thoughts

that 

provoke

feelings

that shouldn’t

exist.

 

No Cure

No remedy

YOU only

listen

to 

yourself

No one

else is wrong

You are right

always.

No apologies

ever! 

 

In hospital,

No visitors,

Alone,

no one

cares.

They do.

YOU pushed

them away.

 

People have

always cared,

but YOU

see them

differently

as now

they see

YOU!

 

Multiple minds

in one

body.

The real 

YOU 

lost 

in a 

scrambled, complicated

unknown mix

of life

of reality

and your thoughts

that have 

created

someone

But have

you ever

been really 

YOU?

 

 

 

 

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The second one is my favourite. A great deal of efficient wording. Succint but effective. Good work!

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