Olive Leaf
I was challenged to write a love poem in 16 lines
Good night, sweet darling,
Don’t close your eyes
Look past the wicker
The soil, the wreaths
Into the sky and beyond
Rise to where your eyes are fixed
And as you fly
Alongside birds at play
Look down
If you catch sight of me
Standing at your graveside
Praying for you
Loving you
Drop an olive leaf
At my feet
I’ll know it’s from you.
© coolhermit 2023
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Bitter/sweet love poem Liked this a lot.
cheers – I had the idea and it came easily – will rewrite it for me book 🙂
You have a silver tongue, ch. No woman is safe with you sniffing about. Lovely piece that I’m sure lots of folk would like to commandeer. Cheers albert 😉
I’ve been celibate for years 🙂
Just lovely. Can’t really say very much more than that except that I found it very touching.
Thanks again, Gee, I appreciate all you say 🙂