Thunderous Silence

When the intensity of your inner yearning overrides the encumbrance of fear, you will find the path once paved in wavering torchlight.

In the screaming of silence the sound of falling raindrops quicken to a downpour. A crescendo held in thrall, burdening the breach.

© Raistlinrev 2019
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Mitch
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An interesting quirky short with the triple alliteration – screaming silence sound.

Allets
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“…paved in wavering torchlight.” – a breath abating line, incredible image. Magic is invoked here. – slc

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