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stormwolf

Oh dear. You must have deleted this. Welcome to the site. It takes time to get to know the ropes but please resubmit again.
Alison x

savvi

Something needs fixing to see the poem but if I click on 2 I get the poem shown below, I need to read this a few more times but you have some very strong lines that kept me fully engaged as a reader, your use of language is bold and bright, even uplifting. Great work with the internal rhymes and a super piece of free verse. You obviously know what you are doing so please take my comments on your other poem with a pinch of salt. Best Keith The Doom of Vigilance Visions of the seeress: A poem that’s… Read more »

savvi

Yes poor choice of word on my part, stirring would have been better, but it does depend on perspective I was referring to the style you write in rather than topic, and what undreamt steed will carry you my king etc.