Summer’s Love.

Just trying out different layout.


Come, solstice sun

come loose these chains

set free this winter-mind,

let flow those streams

of spring’s delight,

to purify the soul.

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Then wrap me round in

night’s embrace, enfold

in velvet sighs,

there whisper songs

of my love’s heart

and call him close

to me.

© sweetwater 2022
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Gerry

Sue I have just sensed pain in one of goth’s poems – and now I sense it in this… Or have I had too much sun today in my beautiful garden ?
gerry x.

Jolen

Some lovely images here and it reads as delicately and sensual as the words you’ve chosen.
blessings,
jolen

Savvi

I like the layout it works really well with the short lines. Your poem is both beautiful and sensual Sue, a delight to read. Keith

Shackleton

Sad and wistful, but like a soft summer breeze, Sue. Enjoyed the read. regards, Mick.

Whale

This is good but a bit too sweet for my taste. It’s a woman’s overflowing emotions. I like emotions contained within the cup and not brimming over. Did your songwriter get to whisper his songs in your ear?

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